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The poem is good, Tre, but the use of oxymoron's as titles has gotten old to me.

Seriously though, good job.

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The poem is good, Tre, but the use of oxymoron's as titles has gotten old to me.

Seriously though, good job.
It fits my meaning exactly, but it is cliche.

Thanks

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Digressions, objections, delight in mockery, carefree mistrust are signs of health; everything unconditional belongs in pathology."
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slipping away to the sounds of simplicity
discovering insanity within ringing silence

caught in sociality reassuring happiness
abandoning excess, redundant hysteria

passionate pursuit, valuing the possibility
synthetically its intricacies stem superficially

devote, serve, donate-- our sheer privallege
flowing everlastingly on Hope's back

shedding off hours in our pleasures
honey oozing on these existing toungues

finding our eyes awakening earlier day by day,
soon our valued possibilities stem deeply
around the final rock of time itself.

slipping away to the sounds of simplicity
flying above ourselves and our past
discovering insanity in our hopes
discovering insanity in insanity
discovering soothing silence

"Our thoughts, values, every ‘yes,’ ‘no,’ ‘if’ and ‘but’ grow from us with the same inevitability as fruits borne on the tree — all related and each with an affinity to each"



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Digressions, objections, delight in mockery, carefree mistrust are signs of health; everything unconditional belongs in pathology."
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slipping away to the sounds of simplicity
discovering insanity within ringing silence

caught in sociality reassuring happiness
abandoning excess, redundant hysteria

passionate pursuit, valuing the possibility
synthetically its intricacies stem superficially

devote, serve, donate-- our sheer privallege
flowing everlastingly on Hope's back

shedding off hours in our pleasures
honey oozing on these existing toungues

finding our eyes awakening earlier day by day,
soon our valued possibilities stem deeply
around the final rock of time itself.

slipping away to the sounds of simplicity
flying above ourselves and our past
discovering insanity in our hopes
discovering insanity in insanity
discovering soothing silence
deep bro


ty for the bump, i'm actually in the process of trying to get some poetry published
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I'll bump this every time I bump this.



edit- published? i needta see this literature pl0x

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Digressions, objections, delight in mockery, carefree mistrust are signs of health; everything unconditional belongs in pathology."
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When you feel a light of heart, it's god touching you. When you feel warm, it's god loving you. When you are inspired, god is too. Because you are his creation, don't fuss, because you are a star in his sky. In his eye we are his dedication.

I wrote this 4 days ago.
"Though I'm broken hearted women done left me hopeless in darkness
Smokin, driftin in sickness, stand by oceans watch the sun glisten
I'm soul-searchin, I'm soul-hurtin
What happens when money don't make you happy I wish this on no person
Ate at the classy places, made all my fashion statements
I got no friends I'm lonely, don't want no pity save it"
Im cryin gangsta tears - NaS
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I see an epidimic - People dying like a plague - Gettin rep is a disease, Street cred, Now you got broken legs - Around the corner, the spot, you the token they say - The things people need to know they dont pay attention to - It springs in my head, You need a seed to grow, I dont play, you just getting to much attention dude - So i watch them run into the fire - Another day a new sunrise.

I wrote this 8 days ago.
"Though I'm broken hearted women done left me hopeless in darkness
Smokin, driftin in sickness, stand by oceans watch the sun glisten
I'm soul-searchin, I'm soul-hurtin
What happens when money don't make you happy I wish this on no person
Ate at the classy places, made all my fashion statements
I got no friends I'm lonely, don't want no pity save it"
Im cryin gangsta tears - NaS
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Over the cloud streaks in the sereen mountain line. Walks on the air a upright man, searching for the light following the streams. He lands beneath the airways and falls instantly, the nature of humans shrunk his heart. When he crushes the land before him a stench of confusion poisons his mind. And now he walks amoung ...us in guide from the heavenly father. But his brain also leaves him to stray away from god.

I wrote this 4 days ago.
"Though I'm broken hearted women done left me hopeless in darkness
Smokin, driftin in sickness, stand by oceans watch the sun glisten
I'm soul-searchin, I'm soul-hurtin
What happens when money don't make you happy I wish this on no person
Ate at the classy places, made all my fashion statements
I got no friends I'm lonely, don't want no pity save it"
Im cryin gangsta tears - NaS
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Where is Mantucket?
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05-11-2010
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Why does money ruin our souls?
Turn our love into sour goals?
Burn our hearts into powdered gold?
So much for strong will, mental power, its sold.
But, these fiends wont take this dough.
Its my bread, and 100 proof is my wine.
My diamonds lay in my head, no roof to my shrine.
Fishing until the water turns red, still wishing that my roots werent oh so blind.
Pissing out blood tell my body burns dead.
The mission is my love and the love is always borderline.
The border to hell past my bed.
"Though I'm broken hearted women done left me hopeless in darkness
Smokin, driftin in sickness, stand by oceans watch the sun glisten
I'm soul-searchin, I'm soul-hurtin
What happens when money don't make you happy I wish this on no person
Ate at the classy places, made all my fashion statements
I got no friends I'm lonely, don't want no pity save it"
Im cryin gangsta tears - NaS
 

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