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01-04-2014
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I occasionally write raps for fun nowadays and I have a couple verses piled up. Me and my friends want to record some shit and mix/master it or whatever and see how shit turns out. We have no mic whatsoever, we may have access to one at my other friends house but we'll see.

Does anyone here know anything about mixing and mastering? Or whatever you need to do to make shit sound better?

Here's my newest verse: (Not finished)

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I occasionally write raps for fun nowadays and I have a couple verses piled up. Me and my friends want to record some shit and mix/master it or whatever and see how shit turns out. We have no mic whatsoever, we may have access to one at my other friends house but we'll see.

Does anyone here know anything about mixing and mastering? Or whatever you need to do to make shit sound better?

Here's my newest verse: (Not finished)

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That was a pretty cool verse. I like the meaning

Only issue I'd have is trying to get some more syllables rhyming in there. For example, with the choice/voice line, you kind of expect something in the next line to rhyme with that too ya know. Just my humble opinion, I'm sure its not easy
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Whats everyones thoughts on King Los? I just started listening to him and I love him. Some of the best wordplay I've probably ever heard
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gunna be honest, that's a pretty wack verse. Try not to take it so seriously, this sounds way too pseudo-prophetic.
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Cool ^ would love to hear the actual flow.

I think your Rhmye structure in this verse has potential to play around with the end word syllables.

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i too write raps in my spare time. check it out and lemme what you think.

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@Cynic, best post in this thread.

And thanks guys for the feedback, good or bad, I'll take it. I actually look at some of my verses as not very great, but I feel like I keep getting a little bit better each time I am practicing a verse or something. And to be honest, I have horrible flow imo, like I don't think I sound good at all, but I can keep with beats and even knock myself off-rhythm for a little to change things up, idk atm it's all just a fun side hobby.

If you guys know of any beats that are sick that me and my friend could use we'll write verses to it : p. lol That's what we usually do find a beat we all agree on and then all write verses to it, haha.

Once again, thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it.





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try doing frees! it's actually surprising what your brain squeezes out when it's under pressure as opposed to when you're sitting there wanting to write :3
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try doing frees! it's actually surprising what your brain squeezes out when it's under pressure as opposed to when you're sitting there wanting to write :3
I do occasionally, I don't like to write down much of what I freestyle, sometimes, but hardly ever. Can't think of that great of stuff when I freestyle. I am practicing though : p





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try doing frees! it's actually surprising what your brain squeezes out when it's under pressure as opposed to when you're sitting there wanting to write :3
This guy^

 

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