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Well that's very nice for being new to writing. Care to share the meaning?
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Today I wrote my first poem ever. You guys probably think it's going to suck. I don't care though. I like it.

1/4/10


Look at me,
Now look closer,
Do you see me now?


Please do look again,
Strain your eyes this time,
Do you see me now?


I want you to see me,
I want to open up to you,
I need you to understand me.


I want you to learn me,
I want you to study me,
I need you to see all of me.


I'm an unmotivated slacker,
I'm a total asshole,
I'm excessively violent.


That's not all of me,
I wish I were that simple,
But there are things people don't see,


How much I can care,
How much I do care,
How much more I will care.


How hard I can try,
How hard I'm trying,
How much harder I'm willing to try.


Do you see me now?
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Well that's very nice for being new to writing. Care to share the meaning?
The beauty of religion comes from its simplicity to justify all staggering, rough questions. The last stanza reveals how I find its simplicity eerily too simple.

"Our thoughts, values, every ‘yes,’ ‘no,’ ‘if’ and ‘but’ grow from us with the same inevitability as fruits borne on the tree — all related and each with an affinity to each"



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Digressions, objections, delight in mockery, carefree mistrust are signs of health; everything unconditional belongs in pathology."
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The beauty of religion comes from its simplicity to justify all staggering, rough questions. The last stanza reveals how I find its simplicity eerily too simple.
That's nice. I really like it.
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We used to have a pretty good poetry thread a while back, but that has long since died. If anyone here writes poems, songs, etc., then post up. I'll do the same.
So.. quadra i was wondering you you remembered I VABALAZ I from halo 2.. just wondering!
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So.. quadra i was wondering you you remembered I VABALAZ I from halo 2.. just wondering!
Yes, I do. Hello sir.
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We know we're all just a few memories,
Cast in paper and bound together,
But we've seen you brought down to your knees,
So many times this cold September,
Don't try to tell me.

You wrote me down so many years before,
Didn't you know that I'd come back?
Don't expect me not to walk through this door,
I see you shaking, you little heart attack,
So just listen.

I've seen your eyes so many times,
But I just can't understand,
Why these shelves can hold me back,
I just want to break them down with my little hands,
Can't you see I'm screaming?

But I guess after all, you know you hold my life in your hands,
And I thought that if I wanted to go, I'm nothing but a cold, poor, little man.
And I know I used to have a dream, but I don't remember what,
And I know nothing's what it seems.

And I know you used to sing a song, but I can't remember it,
And I know I used to sing along.
And you know I used to scream her name, but I don't remeber her,
And you know you used to do the same.

And I know you used to play a game, but I don't think it was fun,
And I know you used to take the train.
And we know you remember us, but we don't remember you,
And we know that you remember.

But until the last one comes for us, we can make a home of this dirty little wooden house.
And if you're so inclined, why don't you stop your crying, little boy?
Because if I'm not mistaken, I believe we've got a little catching up to do.
Oh, you.
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Fuck. I thought you were writing about a girl the whole time, and the last stanza blew me off the edge. The flow of it is brilliant along with the rhyming; if I had a better understanding of what it's about I could appreciate it much more. Father-son relationship? Ugh I can't decide haha

"Our thoughts, values, every ‘yes,’ ‘no,’ ‘if’ and ‘but’ grow from us with the same inevitability as fruits borne on the tree — all related and each with an affinity to each"



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I'm really starting to like poetry. This is getting weird.
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Fate of Kings


There once was a king from Kajore
Whom all his subjects abhorred
The last few words
His royal ears heard
Was an indignant, “up yours!”


 

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