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Quadra, or anyone, may you post some rules to go by when writing, so that a novice like myself could contribute to this thread?

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Quadra, or anyone, may you post some rules to go by when writing, so that a novice like myself could contribute to this thread?
There are no rules when writing poetry. Just look at shit e. e. cummings wrote. You don't even need to follow basic grammar rules. Just write.
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Quadra, or anyone, may you post some rules to go by when writing, so that a novice like myself could contribute to this thread?
Yeah.

There are no rules. First step is to get that mentality out of your mind.


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all my scribbles are in Dutch... so yeah.

it's nice to write shit down sometimes, dont take myself seriously or something.


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Quadra, or anyone, may you post some rules to go by when writing, so that a novice like myself could contribute to this thread?
Yeah, just listen to everyone else. No one expects someone who is new to writing to be exceptionally good at it. You have to work your way up, and no one will judge you while you do it.
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Nice little acrostic poem I wrote in 9th grade. I had just started reading a little philosophy.

Are We There Yet?


First of all, I have no...


Unless I remain vigilant and studious in the...


Though, what I will be gaining is only tangible in the...


Unlikely that my patience will last that far into the...


Really, why work so hard for something that I'll never be in?


Everyone only exists in the here and now.



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Oh, God:

Oh, God
Eternal restless infinite all
Passings- you make light of
Through mystery- you explain

Oh, God
Live and pass, feel and unfeel
Thy power presents my presence
Thy presence presents meaning-
meaning to my mystery
Am I not thy mirror?

Oh, God
The eternal restless infinite all
rugged questions- you smooth
happiness- thy byproduct
miracles, grand happiness- labeled in thy name
am I not cognizant?

Oh, God
Simple granter of meaning,
Easer of question,
all-too-smooth, you have cracked-
eternal mirrors- infinite meaning-
am I not pure sin?
I am your darkest mirror.

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Digressions, objections, delight in mockery, carefree mistrust are signs of health; everything unconditional belongs in pathology."
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Did you just write that? It's pretty damn good for your first work.
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Oh, God:

Oh, God
Eternal restless infinite all
Passings- you make light of
Through mystery- you explain

Oh, God
Live and pass, feel and unfeel
Thy power presents my presence
Thy presence presents meaning-
meaning to my mystery
Am I not thy mirror?

Oh, God
The eternal restless infinite all
rugged questions- you smooth
happiness- thy byproduct
miracles, grand happiness- labeled in thy name
am I not cognizant?

Oh, God
Simple granter of meaning,
Easer of question,
all-too-smooth, you have cracked-
eternal mirrors- infinite meaning-
am I not pure sin?
I am your darkest mirror.
Agreeing with Atrophy. I don't believe in God, but I really liked that. Especially for your first work (If it's your first work).
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I don't believe in god either. There's a meaning behind it, especially the last 2 stanzas. I just wrote it yesterday, thanks!

"Our thoughts, values, every ‘yes,’ ‘no,’ ‘if’ and ‘but’ grow from us with the same inevitability as fruits borne on the tree — all related and each with an affinity to each"



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Digressions, objections, delight in mockery, carefree mistrust are signs of health; everything unconditional belongs in pathology."
 

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